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Thanksgiving 2020

11/26/2020

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Image by ColossalBean. For prints of any image by this artist use the PoetryBones contact link.

This post (and writing session) features a textured approach to Thanksgiving reflection.
  1. In "Besaydoo" we appreciate the warmth of an inside joke, varied forms of affection, a sustained long distance connection through a shared joke, that is also language play.  Hear the poet reading her poem.
  2. In "Blessings" the traditional act of giving thanks, of counting blessings in any time of year in any place.
  3. In  "More Than Something Else" a Native American writer responds to being labled "something else" in political exit polls. Hear Ortiz reading her poem
  4. A link to the NYT's article "Verses vs. Virus: What These Poets Laureate are Thankful For"
  5. Lastly, the "Gather In" reading from Poets.org

First Mentor Poem

Adroit Journal · Yalie Kamara - Besaydoo
Besaydoo
YALIE KAMARA
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Source: The Adroit Journal

Writing Prompts #1

Choose a provoking prompt, and write a poem for 10 minutes:
What blessings do you give at departure?
Long distance phone conversations
Misheard words, misheard lyrics
Ravages of time, distance, and circumstance
Being apart from a loved one
Too newborn pure
​Pull apart like string cheese
Code words
Secret language with friends

Second Mentor Poem

​Blessings
JAY PARINI
 
Blessings for these things:
the dandelion greens I picked in summer
and would douse with vinegar and oil
at grandma’s little house in Pennsylvania,
near the river. Or the small potatoes
she would spade to boil and butter,
which I ate like fruit with greasy fingers.

Blessings for my friend, thirteen
that summer when we prayed by diving from a cliff
on Sunday mornings in the church
of mud and pebbles, foam and moss.
I will not forget the fizz and tingle,
sunning in wet skin on flat, cool rocks,
so drenched in summer.

And for you, my love, blessings
for the times we lay so naked in a bed
without the sense of turbulence or tides.
I could just believe the softness of our skin,
those sheets like clouds,
how when the sunlight turned to roses,
neither of us dared to move or breathe.

Blessings on these things and more:
the rivers and the houses full of light,
the bitter weeds that taste like sun,
dirt-sweetened spuds,
the hard bright pebbles, spongy mosses,
lifting of our bodies into whiffs of cloud,
all sleep-warm pillows in the break of dawn.

Source: ​poets.org

Writing Prompts #2

  • For ten minutes, write your own “blessings” poem or gratitude list poem
  • Write your own “blessings” poem
  • Church of . . . ?
  • What is our church made of?
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For Discussion

CNN reported 2020 presidential Election exit polls by race, referring to the Native population as "something else."  Native commentary delivered a thorough "roasting" via twitter and memes, highlighting anger with the continued marginalization of Native peoples.  And some had fun with the multiple meanings of "something else." 

​Below is Rainy Dawn Ortiz's poetic response.
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Academy of American Poets · Rainy Dawn Ortiz: "More Than Something Else"
More Than Something Else
RAINY DAWN ORTIZ                                                

​Something Else.
Some one else
Some where else

That place is here,
In my home,
We are here.

I am brown,
Brown hair,
Brown eyes,
Like cookies Feather tells me, and I like to think it’s perfectly
cooked Pueblo cookies.

My kids are something else,
9 different shades of brown,
All beautiful.

My grandkids are something else,
4 brown eyes, 2 blue eyes,
All Native,
Definitely something else, as I watch them be rowdy, be loving,
be here in this world.

We are here
On this earth
In this time and place

In our homes,
On our lands,
In the cities,
With our families, laughing loudly, cooking together, protecting
each other.

We are something else
With our songs
Our dances.

We pray with corn meal,
Eagle feathers,
Medicine bundles,
Burn some sage, make sure to acknowledge the four directions,
as the sun comes up.

We are the something else,
Who were here,
To greet Christopher Columbus

We were born from
This earth,
Crawled out of the center,
Of our mother’s womb, we are important, we are strong.

We are something else,
We are Pueblo people, Plains people, Forest People, Desert
people, Nomadic people, Cliff dwellers, Ocean fishers, Lake and
river fishers, hunters, medicine collectors, horse riders, artists,
speakers, lawyers, doctors, teachers, we are human beings.
We are something else,
We are Native People,
Indigenous to this land.
We are a proud,
Something else.

​Source: Academy of American Poets
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Header art by Sally Deng and from the NYT online article

This article starts with a grim overview of all the reasons one's gratitude could be dimmed this year.  But keep reading.  Don't give into the doom and gloom that has largely characterized 2020.  Author Shawn Hubler insists "gratitude persists." 
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NYT  asked poets laureate across the country "why the people in their states would be thankful." And according to Hubler, the poets laureate "enthusiastically responded . . . "   

American readers, you may find your state singled out with a link to the poet's response -- sometimes both previous and current laureates wrote in -- in verse and prose.  Many take the opportunity to feature state mottos, birds, and native trees and vegetation in their texts of gratitude.  For PoetryBones writers and readers outside the U.S. there is still a vast response to be enjoyed here -- with voices at odds with their states, in love with their people, honoring the land.  It's a wonderful Thanksgiving read!

The Academy of American Poets posted this video from their event "Gather In Poems: A Virtual Reading" from Tuesday, November 24.  It "reflects on how sharing poems can create a sense of community, especially at a time when so many must be apart."  The recording features 17 poets reading favorite poems.  It was also a fundraising event to support the Academy's free publications and programs, including their K–12 education program.

Click COMMENTS to share your favorite read from this week's post -- your gratitude list -- or a golden line from this week's original writing!
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Finding Grace in Between

11/19/2020

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First Mentor Poem

Grace                                                
JOY HARJO
                                    For Darlene Wind and James Welch
I think of Wind and her wild ways the year we had nothing to lose and lost it anyway in the cursed country of the fox. We still talk about that winter, how the cold froze imaginary buffalo on the stuffed horizon of snowbanks. The haunting voices of the starved and mutilated broke fences, crashed our thermostat dreams, and we couldn't stand it one more time. So once again we lost a winter in stubborn memory, walked through cheap apartment walls, skated through fields of ghosts into a town that never wanted us, in the epic search for grace. 

Like Coyote, like Rabbit, we could not contain our terror and clowned our way through a season of false midnights. We had to swallow that town with laughter, so it would go down easy as honey. And one morning as the sun struggled to break ice, and our dreams had found us with coffee and pancakes in a truck stop along Highway 80, we found grace.

I could say grace was a woman with time on her hands, or a white buffalo escaped from memory. But in that dingy light it was a promise of balance. We once again understood the talk of animals, and spring was lean and hungry with the hope of children and corn. 
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I would like to say, with grace, we picked ourselves up and walked into the spring thaw. We didn't; the next season was worse. You went home to Leech Lake to work with the tribe and I went south. And, Wind, I am still crazy. I know there is something larger than the memory of a dispossessed people. We have seen it. 

Source: Academy of American Poets at poets.org

Poem Prompts #1

We continue to crowd source prompts today. This exercise allows for surprise and spontaneity.  After reading each poem, participants posted a word, phrase, image, or first thought that came to the mind.  Writers then DIY'ed their own writing prompts!  Choose something that immediately speaks to you -- write a poem about: 
cheap apartment walls
the wind and her wild ways
picking yourself up
the [memory of the] dispossessed
what went down slow as honey
having nothing to lose and losing it anyway
whether or not you deserve grace
imaginary frozen buffalo

wind
coyotes and rabbits
I went south
white buffalo ghost
I say Grace was a woman
country of the fox
the promise of children and corn
 grace…balance

Second Mentor Poem

Unlike objects, two stories can occupy the same space
CHARLES PEEK
 
Out along the last curve in the brick walk
the grass has begun to green,
with the freezing cold and coming snow
its certain fate.
 
The cranes make the same mistake,
fields of red capped heads attest their arrival
just before the worst blizzard of winter
makes it impossible to tell the field from the river.
 
And we, too, have known these mortal mishaps,
miscalculated our time, found ourselves out of step,
arriving too early, staying on too late,
misjudging the nearness, the vengeance of the storm.
 
The cranes, the grass, they tell us:
this can go on for millions of years.

Source: poetryfoundation.org

Poem Prompts #2

In a poem, tell me about:
mortal mishaps
miscalculating time
being out of step
arriving too early staying on too
​     late
​this can go on for millions of years
         .
misjudging the nearness
misjudging the vengeance of ​
red capped heads attesting arrival
if you can pull someone back
​the vengeance of a storm

For Discussion

November
AMY LOWELL
 
The vine leaves against the brick walls of my house,
Are rusty and broken.
Dead leaves gather under the pine-trees,
The brittle boughs of lilac-bushes
Sweep against the stars.
And I sit under a lamp
Trying to write down the emptiness of my heart.
Even the cat will not stay with me,
But prefers the rain
Under the meagre shelter of a cellar window.
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DIY Write #1

11/12/2020

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This week we "crowd sourced" the possible prompts for each poem.  This exercise allowed for surprise and spontaneity.  After reading each poem, participants posted a word, phrase, image, or first thought that came to the mind.  Writers then DIY'ed their own writing prompts!  Choose something that immediately speaks to you, too.

First Mentor Poem

A Sense of Place
BILLY COLLINS
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Source: Poetry Foundation

Poem Prompts #1

Write a poem about: 
a sense of place
storms
if things had been different
rootedness
this is my landscape
fantasyland
​river in the ceiling

​upholstered chair
what do you see from your seat?

a place that could have claimed you
high clouds
 little couriers
 back to it all
Ready. Set. Write a poem for 10 minutes!

Second Mentor Poem

Dictionary of Owl
BY MARY MERIAM
 
Who cares about the redbud tree, its flowers
half-black, half-pink, from winter’s April freeze;
who cares who lives halfway or dies too soon,
the blue jay’s baby squirming on bare ground,
the agonies of blood, the frigid breeze
shaking the fragile sense of April showers;
who cares who craves the heated pools of June,
the lake of boaters buzzing by or drowned.
Two vultures meet me at my open door,
scanning for carrion, the stink of spasms,
the sky-gods pecking rotting flesh for food;
who cares if this strange order ends in good,
or if the chickadee lands in the chasms
of endless carelessness forevermore.

​​Source: Poetry Foundation

Poem Prompts #2

In a poem, tell me about:
who cares?
scavenger
what do you care about?
fragile sense
desperation
a dictionary of _____
the vultures
endless carelessness

definition of sounds
death and life
open seas
two vultures
carrion
birds, just birds

Ready. Set. Write a poem for 10 minutes!

For Discussion

Snake
KATIE PETERSON
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The thunderstorm came like a pot boiling over and the color
of water was made by that, all of a sudden, a pigment
more tropical than dense with the reflection of light.
Everywhere the scent of at least five different kinds of plants
lifted up. The desert can’t talk back but I believe
it breathes instead, breathes vivid when the water
wants it the water can’t wait and it breathes back.
I turned and went into the house.
Under the dining room table, a snake.
Green with a yellow stripe bisecting its back.
Motion ate each centimeter of floor
and air, scared, it makes sense to say, though there
exists or existed no safer time ever in which that shape
wouldn’t want to move, dead August being the exception
to this when heat makes molasses of all of us.
Why did I want to chase it out? I did, I got a rake and kept
making it make that beautiful scared
shape upon the floor, so clean.
Like two ice cubes rubbing each other
and too cold to melt. Nothing organized that fear.
Seeing the edges it found its way out.


Hear "Snake" read at Poetry Foundation's "Poem of the Day" audio recordings
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Numbers (Part 1)

11/5/2020

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Recently we have taken a break from the pressure to always write poems during writing practice and embrace the prose form in response to poetry-as-prompts.  This week's prompts challenge us with numbers.  For me, once I started listing the cost of things, for example, the numbers flowed in a way different from how words flow.  Try it in your own writing practice!

Mentor Poem

indian dancer
NILA NORTHSUN
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Source: The Remembered Earth: An Anthology of Contemporary Native American Literature.  University of New Mexico Press (April 1, 1981)

Writing Prompt #1:

  • Tell me about your recent expenses--or about money you've won.
  • Tell me about someone who is like "little brother" -- or about a person who is all show.
  • Tell me about someone you judge--or about being "judgy."

Writing Prompt #2:

 Take a look at a few song titles with numbers in them or songs with great number-phrases in them.  Under each song is a suggested prompt. Write for 10 minutes
  • 50 WAYS TO LOSE YOUR LOVER    Tell me about 50 ways to _____ ?
  • 99 RED LUFT BALLOONS     99 what?  What would you like 99 of?
  • DECEMBER 1963 (oh what a night)    Tell me about “what a night!”
  • 99 PROBLEMS    What else you got problems about if a lover aint one of 'em?
  • I’M GONNA BE (500 Miles)    What would you walk 500 miles for?  Tell me about 500 miles of...
  • NOTHING COMPARES 2 U ( It's been 7 hrs and 15 days)    Tell me about your last time frame​ How long has it been since . .  .  ?

Golden Lines . . .

. . . are chosen lines of text, popped in the chat sections for pondering.  Here are a few of ours after today's writing session. What are your golden lines?
  • I know where to scritch, and just how to scritch
  • Pluck your sister’s eyebrows
  • The voice of water swishing through roots and brush on the bank. The voice of whispering cottonwood landing on my knee or quickly singed in the rippling waves of heat above the fire
  • We were fed a steady diet of hope for the packaged life we thought we craved
  • The  3,742 proclamations of gleefully sharing others sad stories of suffering
  • To the Salish Sea and ferry boats and salty folks
  • Mohawk man has written a poem on my hand, the hand that wants to stroke his long black hair fragrant with sage
  • Learn to interpret eye corner folds, bouncing eyebrows and forehead rippling wrinkles
  •  Looked in windows of apartments where only hippies and old writers live
  • The waves of the ocean softly come to shore. Back and forth, she holds the space in the bowl of Mother Earth. She knows by heart that is how it’s done. And now, I too, get to remember
  • I have no need for Indiana. Do they deserve the hawk wind and yearly snow dumps because they’re at the bottom of Lake Michigan?  Yeah
  • Nicotine gum chews the sh_t outta my tongue
  •  I sat on the swivel back chair, head against the wall
  •  Nervous system like a 200,000 mile tranny
  • I remember the bottom falling out of my belly. My heart followed…so did a thousand tears

In Closing:

We agreed that to think in numbers instead of all word-expression was freeing and reminded us of the "Life lessons From Math Class" session, where we treated provocative titles of mathematics theories as only words, making play on the title versus understanding anything about the actual theory--Pigeonhole Principle? Excluded Third? Hopf Lemma, anyone?

What have been your number discoveries? Tell me about it in the comments section.
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