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Poems Chosen by High School Students

5/26/2021

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Introduction

As the school year comes to a close, I thought it would be an interesting bridging exercise to join seasoned, veteran writers with young performers in some way.  I am forever fascinated by what high school students are drawn to when they are given choice in poetry, so this week's post centers around their chosen pieces.  I invite you to write to anything that triggers, excites, or resonates with you in any of the poems.  Or, write to the student--share a dialogue with them about the poem!  I am happy to share your messages with the students featured here.

The Poems

Marty: "If you live life without regret, you will never fear the reaper. All the events that happen in life can have meaning if you choose to give it meaning. While everything that happens is meaningless because overtime everything you did will be forgotten, that doesn’t mean you meant nothing. We all know death will happen. We still try to prevent it with vaccines, eating well, and exercising which only shows that life has meaning to us and keeps us going. "
1969
by ALEX DIMITROV
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Source: Poetry Foundation
Bellina: "The title of the poem is 'The Animals,' so aptly I assumed it to be about animals. I assumed the poem would have a more juvenile theme based on the title.  This was not the case."
The Animals
by JOSEPHINE JACOBSON
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Source: Poetry Foundation
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​Lucy: "I expected to uncover some form of jealousy or maybe guilt some other person was hiding. I didn't expect the poem to set a positive message.  Humankind could accomplish so much more if people stopped worrying about what others thought of them and become confident with themselves, with their natural gifts. " 
Envy
by MARY LAMB
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Source: Poetry Foundation
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​Cristiano "The poem is titled 'Numbers,' something I know is included in everyday life. People may dispute it but it may be the language of the  future, in coding.  Numbers, in a concept, is a very creatively rich subject.  The imagery of dancing swans and silver bodied fishes gives a beautiful tone; it makes you want to keep reading." 
Numbers
by  MARY CORNISH
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Source: Poetry Foundation

Carli: "I like the moral, and the fact that they believe in reincarnation."
Walking Home 
by  MARIE HOWE
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          Source: Poetry 180

Elodie: "The tone of this poem is that of admiration and reassurance. The speaker is telling the subject of the poem how nothing in the material world could ever live up to their beauty or memory. Images such as 'Not marble nor the gilded monuments' or 'But you shall shine more bright in these contents; Than unswept stone besmeared with sluttish time' are good representations of this."
Sonnet 55: Not marble nor the gilded monuments
by WILLIAM SHAKESPEARE
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Charles: "I chose this poem because it looked interesting and I thought it would be at least a little humorous. I mean, I think the poet titled it '300 Goats' because there are a lot of goats in the poem."
300 Goats
by NAOMI SHIHAB NYE
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Writing Prompts to Saveur's Picnic Photography

5/19/2021

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Photo by Helen Rosner at Saveur.com

Introduction

All of the food photography in this post are from the article "36 Pretty and Portable Picnic Recipes to Elevate Your Next Outdoor Dining Experience" at saveur.com.  I was enamored by the article because (a) the photography is delicious. (b) I'm really ready for the kind of break this indulgent picnic would offer. (c) The writing practice around reading the recipes and studying the photography made me appreciate the gardens and gardeners, the bakeries and bakers, and the harvesting and prepping of all this food, as well as the photographers, and all the earnest, magical-picnic seeking people who will lovingly attempt to make and pack these gastronomical delights in the next months! 

And then, at the end of the session, we read "Glen Uig"?! I mean, people, welcome to the most "elemental" picnic experience of the century.
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I earnestly try to credit each photographer below.  You can find the picnic recipes [mmmm] at saveur.com!

5 Minute Warm Up Writes

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Salad: Fava Bean, Herb, and Pomegranate Fattoush Photo: André Baranowski
  • See the bowl as only patches of colors and shapes; then, write.
  • Let taste, texture, or food groups inspire writing.
  • Mindfully imagine what it took -- from grower to chef -- for this bowl of food to appear.  Write a poem that traces that journey. Or write about eating it.
  • Write about the bowl, the utensils, and the table.

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  • Invent a drink recipe in poem form.
  • Write about drinking, all the way down the gullet.
  • Tell me about the last drink you had.​​​
Drink photos: Todd Coleman and Helen Rosner

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Picnic sandwich photos and recipes at Savuer.com
Which sandwich is a metaphor for your life right now?
  • Give each sandwich a fictional name, a Seussical name, a Saveur name, a metaphorical name, an ironic name.
  • Write a poem that includes all the types of imagery: visual, gustatory, tactile, auditory, olfactory.
  • Tell me about the best/worst picnic food you’ve ever had-in great detail.
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Mentor Poem

The Picnic by the Ocean
GRACE CAVALIERI

The Octopus offers me one of his three hearts,
briar and holly for friendship the second and third
saved for times of longing, times of loss.
A strange romance, I admit--
Friends would never approve or believe,
yet he was untouched by human hands.
How can we say this is not a source of wonder--
“Who will sing my song, if not you?”  he asked.
“Who will dream of me, as I lay under the stillness of water?”
Even an Octopus can be eloquent, and then again,
as we know, enormous need can become power.
What am I supposed to do now?
I stand by the water,
my woolen dress unraveling in the waves.

Source: poets.org

Writing Prompt

Adapt one of your warm-up writes into a magical poem.

For Discussion

This poem is so epic, beyond picnic food photography, beyond any picnic I've ever experienced, deserves-its-own-blogpost-and-critical-analysis type of epic.  "Elemental" is another word repeatedly used in our group's discussion of the poem.  How it landed in us as we read and where it lands in the real world were not so at odds as you might think.  And where Glen Uig sits in the real world, is apparently, at the outer edges of it -- the gateway to the Hebrides -- which is it's own epic-ness.  And exactly where I'd like to "picnic," though that word sounds much too tame for where and how this poem happens.  
Glen Uig
RICHARD HUGO

Believe in this couple this day who come
to picnic in the Faery Glen. They pay rain
no matter, or wind. They spread their picnic
under a gale-stunted rowan. Believe they grew tired
of giants and heroes and know they believe
in wise tiny creatures who live under the rocks.

Believe these odd mounds, the geologic joke
played by those wise tiny creatures far from
the world's pitiful demands: make money, stay sane.
Believe the couple, by now soaked to the skin,
sing their day as if dry, as if sheltered inside
Castle Ewen. Be glad Castle Ewen's only a rock
that looks like a castle. Be glad for no real king.

These wise tiny creatures, you'd better believe,
have lived through it all: the Viking occupation,
clan torturing clan, the Clearances, the World War
II bomber gone down, a fiery boom
on Beinn Edra. They saw it from here. They heard
the sobs of last century's crofters trail off below
where every day the Conon sets out determined for Uig.
They remember the Viking who wandered off course,
under the hazelnut tree hating aloud all he'd done.

Some days dance in the bracken. Some days go out
wide and warm on bad roads to collect the dispossessed
and offer them homes. Some days celebrate addicts
sweet in their dreams and hope to share with them
a personal spectrum. The loch here's only a pond,
the monster is in it small as a wren.

Believe the couple who have finished their picnic
and make wet love in the grass, the tiny wise creatures
cheering them on. Believe in milestones, the day
you left home forever and the cold open way
a world wouldn't let you come in. Believe you
and I are that couple. Believe you and I sing tiny
and wise and could if we had to eat stone and go on.

Source: Poets.org
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Fairy Glen, as viewed from Castle Ewan. Photo by Kerry Wolfe [Atlas Obscura user]
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Fairy Glen, Uig. Photo by Francis J Taylor Photography
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Clothing & Nakedness

5/12/2021

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Image by Willi Heidelbach

1st Mentor Poem

On Clothes
KHALIL GIBRAN

And the weaver said, "Speak to us of Clothes."
And he answered:
Your clothes conceal much of your beauty, yet they hide not the unbeautiful.
And though you seek in garments the freedom of privacy you may find in them a harness and a chain.
Would that you could meet the sun and the wind with more of your skin and less of your raiment,
For the breath of life is in the sunlight and the hand of life is in the wind.
Some of you say, "It is the north wind who has woven the clothes to wear."
But shame was his loom, and the softening of the sinews was his thread.
And when his work was done he laughed in the forest.
Forget not that modesty is for a shield against the eye of the unclean.
And when the unclean shall be no more, what were modesty but a fetter and a fouling of the mind?
And forget not that the earth delights to feel your bare feet and the winds long to play with your hair.

​Source: Best Poems Encyclopedia

Writing Prompts #1

  • Write about any of your clothing that is a “harness and a chain”
  • Write about why and how you wear your clothes.  
  • Write about when you went naked.
  • Write about shame or modesty or how the earth delights to feel your bareness
  • Write about when your clothes were a big deal . . . for some reason​

2nd Mentor Poem

Ode to a Dressmaker's Dummy
DONALD JUSTICE

Papier-mache body; blue-and-black cotton jersey cover.
Metal stand. Instructions included.
   --Sears, Roebuck Catalogue

          O my coy darling, still
          You wear for me the scent
     Of those long afternoons we spent,
          The two of us together,
Safe in the attic from the jealous eyes
          Of household spies
And the remote buffooneries of the weather;
         So high,
Our sole remaining neighbor was the sky,
          Which, often enough, at dusk,
     Leaning its cloudy shoulders on the sill,
Used to regard us with a bored and cynical eye.

          How like the terrified,
          Shy figure of a bride
     You stood there then, without your clothes,
          Drawn up into
     So classic and so strict a pose
     Almost, it seemed, our little attic grew
Dark with the first charmed night of the honeymoon.
     Or was it only some obscure
     Shape of my mother's youth I saw in you,
There where the rude shadows of the afternoon
     Crept up your ankles and you stood
     Hiding your sex as best you could?--
     Prim ghost the evening light shone through.

Source: https://poets.org/poem/ode-dressmakers-dummy

Writing Prompts #2

  • Write an ode to an article of clothing, accessory, your sewing table, your mannequins, your dummies or buffoons.
  • Make a list of clothing you own and compare each piece to something else (writing metaphors and similes)

For Discussion

​“What Do Women Want?” 
KIM ADDONIZIO

I want a red dress.
I want it flimsy and cheap,
I want it too tight, I want to wear it
until someone tears it off me.
I want it sleeveless and backless,
this dress, so no one has to guess
what’s underneath. I want to walk down
the street past Thrifty’s and the hardware store
with all those keys glittering in the window,
past Mr. and Mrs. Wong selling day-old
donuts in their café, past the Guerra brothers
slinging pigs from the truck and onto the dolly,
hoisting the slick snouts over their shoulders.
I want to walk like I’m the only
woman on earth and I can have my pick.
I want that red dress bad.
I want it to confirm
your worst fears about me,
to show you how little I care about you
or anything except what
I want. When I find it, I’ll pull that garment
from its hanger like I’m choosing a body
to carry me into this world, through
the birth-cries and the love-cries too,
and I’ll wear it like bones, like skin,
it’ll be the goddamned
dress they bury me in.

Source: Poetry Foundation
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10 Writing Prompts 3 Mentor Poems on Mix-Tapes & Sex

5/5/2021

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Image from: "The Lost Art of Cassette Tape Spines"    dangerousminds.net

First Mentor Poem

Say it With a Mix-Tape
CHRISTOPHER GOODRICH
 
These are the professionals. The ones who know
why birds suddenly appear every time you are near;

the self-assured idols who can ask Do you
want to know a secret oooooo waaaa oooooo?

without sounding stupid. I’ve begged
them to tell us why secrets are

given as gifts in obvious packaging.
So much of falling is sitting still, filling

a blank tape with voices of famous people--
the mystic warbling of Joni Mitchell,

the simple sex of Simon and Garfunkel.
This is what it sounds like to be me in love with you.

And because only Ray Charles, who sings from both sides now,
can translate my heart’s handwriting, I’ve included

two of his numbers, see side A, songs two and nine.
He will insist, as many times as you care to listen:

I’m gonna love you like nobody’s loved you come rain
or come shine, which, incidentally, is true, I’m gonna.

The Mix-Tape: proof that love loves James Brown, the reason
we turn to Nina Simone when sex fails to fulfill us,

why, when harmony is what is missing,
a light rhythmic rain begins to fall.
 
SOURCE: Rattle.com

First Writing Prompts

  • Tell me about your mix tape “opus.”
  • Tell me about making or receiving a mix tape.
  • Tell me how you were like Orpheus descending to get your one true love with music.
  • Weave lines from your mix tape song favorites into a poem.​

Second Mentor Poem

My Sex Life 
DIANE SEUSS
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Having a threesome with Jack
Daniels and Billie Holiday.
Garden sex with the dumb serpent.
Sex at the Wailing Wall, the Berlin Wall,
the Great Wall, the Wall of Names. Sex
with Sonny Corleone against the wall during
the wedding. Having horse sex with Mr. Ed
reruns. Olive oil sex with the Big Cook.
Clothesline sex with the chickens hanging there;
with the bodies without heads running through
the pumpkin vines. Having gardenia sex
with my father’s romantic notions of how to get
a girl. Educated sex with the New York Times
paper carrier. Grandfather sex with a swivel
rocker. Camel sex with the butts in the ashtray.
Hot sex with the air conditioner. Having nostalgic
sex with the guy who embalmed my father. Vietnam
sex with Doug, who’s paranoid and gives good head.
Dirty sex with the potato farmer’s daughter. Having
Bob’s Country Club sex with one of the Drake
brothers. The good looking one. Not the smart
one. Not the one who went on to make something
of himself. Chuck, the one with a hi-fi ass. Tamale
sex, going to Juanita’s on a booty call hoping to get
Gabriel’s attention while he leans over the fryer.
Having halfway sex at a rest stop halfway between
here and there, meaning Michigan City, the town
where I was born. Ore boat sex. Mall parking lot
sex. Nun doll sex. Rock me like a baby sex.
The Reverend Al Green sex. Sex in the black groove
of an old record album, sex in the scratch on the vinyl,
sex in the skip, in the skip, in the skip, sex in the applause
of the long dead audience thrilled with Miss Billie Holiday
in a single spotlight singing Strange Fruit. Sex in the dark
after she leaves the stage. Sex on her grave; sex that
blasphemes death. Arrowhead in the heart sex. Sex on the body
of the last buffalo. Sex on God’s welcome mat, in Mother
Hubbard’s cupboard, sex with her poor dog’s bone.​

​Source: Rattle.com

Second Writing Prompts

  • Write a poem about the kinds of sex you’ve had.
  • Or a poem about all the sex you didn’t have, but could have/ would have / should have had.
  • Write a tribute to your friends and the kinds of sex they have.
  • Write a tribute poem to former lovers.
  • Make a list of all the songs that have sex in the title.

For Discussion

Jane's Heartbreak Yard Sale
LYTTON BELL

Who sells used sex toys at a garage sale?
I knew I had to pull over
as soon as I saw that table full of dildos
just to hear this woman’s story

A whole bed was for sale
and a claw-footed bathtub
a motorcycle, a large stack of books
lingerie and ten photo albums
Photo albums?
Leafing through, I could see that they were all
happy couple love photos:
their trip to Hawaii
backpacking through Europe
mountain climbing in Tibet

And I shouldn’t forget to mention all of the love notes
three huge cardboard boxes full of them. I picked one up:
I stood outside your window for hours last night
while you were sleeping
hoping you would feel me there, and pull open the curtain

I approached her as she sat by the cash box
wearing a pair of over-sized pink sunglasses
So, this is everything he ever gave you? I asked her, trying to be nonchalant
She nodded
I was going to light it all on fire, she told me
But what’s the point?
True, I replied, not sure what else to say
She seemed so peaceful about it. Almost happy

Just then I noticed a pile of CDs:
Jane’s Joy Ride Mix
Jane’s Taking a Bath Mix
Mix for Jane for When She’s Feeling a Little Blue
And one called
In Case of an Emergency, I LOVE YOU
It was sealed with yellow CAUTION tape
and had obviously never been opened

Can I buy this? I asked her
$3.50, she said
I gave her the money and put the CD in my car
and cried and could not open it
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​Source: Rattle

Discussion/Writing Prompt

  • After reading "Jane's Heartbreak Yard Sale," write a response poem to each of the speaker's questions, rhetorical and otherwise: ​Who sells used sex toys at a garage sale?  Photo albums?   So, this is everything he ever gave you?  But what's the point?  Can I buy this?
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