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Try Writing Ekphrastic Poetry (Part 1)

7/28/2021

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What is Ekphrastic Poetry?

Ekphrastic poetry explores art. Using a rhetorical device known as ekphrasis, the poet engages with a painting, drawing, sculpture, or other form of visual art. Poetry about music and dance might also be considered a type of ekphrastic writing.

​The term ekphrastic (also spelled ecphrastic) originates from a Greek expression for description. The earliest ekphrastic poems were vivid accounts of real or imagined scenes. Through effusive use of details, writers in ancient Greece aspired to transform the visual into the verbal. Later poets moved beyond description to reflect on deeper meanings. Today, the word ekphrastic can refer to any literary response to a non-literary work. 

SOURCE: Jackie Craven, for ThoughtCo.com, Feb. 2021
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Techniques for Writing an Ekphrastic Poem

  • Write about the scene you see in the artwork.
  • Think about what the subjects did after the painting or sculpture. Did they move from that spot? Where did they go?
  • Write a conversation between the characters in the piece.
  • If you're in a gallery or museum, write dialogue between two pieces facing each other.
  • Write about your experience of looking at the artwork.
  • Write a monologue from the point of view of a character or object in the artwork.  Or write what you think they want to say to you.
  • Compare the artwork to something else.
  • Imagine a story about the creation of the artwork.  OR, write in the assumed voice of the artist.
  • Is there anything in the artwork that is a metaphor for something in your own life?  Write about that.


​Now, You Try It  #1

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New York Movie (1939) by Edward Hopper

​As you look at the artwork, pay attention to how it makes you feel. Take notes about any sensory impressions it gives you or memories it triggers.  Write for 10-15 minutes.

IF YOU WANT MORE ON THIS PAINTING:
  • Listen to a 3 minute audio from two curators at MoMA, discussing movies in 1939 in New York city.  This entertaining excerpt is from the “Made in New York” exhibit.
  • Read  Joseph Stanton's ekphrastic poem "Edward Hopper's 'New York Movie' " here.​
​All we can see on our side / of the room is one man and one woman— / as neat, respectable, and distinct / as the empty chairs that come / between them . . . Here we are an accidental / 
fellowship, sheltering from the city's / obscure bereavements to face a screened, / imaginary living, / as if it were a destination / we were moving toward. 
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  • Enjoy MoMA security officer José Colón's close look at Edward Hopper’s painting, noting that the painting’s "lush detail  simultaneously captures an intimate moment and triggers a longing for the shared moviegoing experiences of the past -- and hopefully the future."


You Try It  #2

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Alexander Calder, Rouge Triomphant (Triumphant Red), 1959–63

​As you look at the artwork, pay attention to how it makes you feel. Take notes about any sensory impressions it gives you or memories it triggers.  
Write for 10-15 minutes.

IF YOU WANT MORE ON THIS ARTWORK: 

Under a Calder Mobile, August 1959
JACKIE CRAVEN
 
A bird was missing, or maybe
a boomerang, but a blue one
fallen off the wire
so the others hung crookedly,
twirling and colliding
when the window fan blew strong.
Their shadows wobbled
over the spoon-shaped chairs
and the sofa where I drowsed,
a child adrift in the summer heat.
Dipping and swerving, the shadows
became my father’s Thunderbird
vanishing over a hill, then turned
into a swirl of phantom birds--
             Sofa to chair to beyond,
             sofa to chair and gone--
except for the heavy one
that smothered me with the scent
of cocktails and cigarettes. I woke
beneath the damp weight of my mother,
rocking as she moaned--
             Do you love me?
             Do you love me more than him?
 
SOURCE: Originally published April 15, 2020 AgniOnline
https://agnionline.bu.edu/poetry/under-a-calder-mobile-august-1959


​You Try It  #3

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Family Portrait, II is an oil on canvas painting created by Florine Stettheimer in 1933.

​Listen to this wonderful (1:44) audio clip from curator, Anne Umland at the MoMA.
 Now, go on to write a “family portrait.”
  • How would you represent yourself?
  • Who all is in your portrait?
  • What objects (like the flowers) would you enlarge?
  • What “ghostly images” would you write for the background?
  • What are you “known for?”
  • Who comes to see you; who comes to your parties?
  • Of course, these are suggesions, branch off in any way that has energy.
Drop a note in the comment section, telling us about your experience with Ekphrastic Poetry or in writing your family "portrait." 
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Full Moon Writing Prompts & The Antonym Poem

7/21/2021

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Two still pics from the video poem "The Opposites Game." See below.

Introduction

Fair Warning: This week is a hodgepodge!  With a warmup, an antonym experiment, and a poem write challenge, writing practice will be a bit of an obstacle course today!  
Nature does not care that you are comfortable, only that you evolve. ~ Harville Hendrix

1.  Writing Warm-Up

From a list of adjectives for describing a beach, we randomly selected three for a unique writing warm-up!  Write for five minutes to each topic. Tell me about . . .
  • a FARAWAY beach
  • an ANCIENT or HIDDEN beach
  • a TURBULENT beach
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2.  "Moon" Writing Prompt 

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According to The Old Farmer's Almanac this Friday (7-23-2021) is July's Full Moon.  It is called the Buck Moon because the antlers of male deer (bucks) are in full-growth mode at this time. Bucks shed and regrow their antlers each year, producing a larger and more impressive set as the years go by.
  • Several other names for this month’s Moon reference ANIMALS: Feather Moulting Moon (Cree) and Salmon Moon, a Tlingit term indicating when fish returned to the area and were ready to be harvested.
  • PLANTS are also featured in July’s Moon names: Berry Moon (Anishinaabe), Moon When the Chokecherries are Ripe (Dakota), Month of the Ripe Corn Moon (Cherokee), and Raspberry Moon (Algonquin, Ojibwe).
  • WEATHER & SUMMER SEASON names: Thunder Moon (Western Abenaki) and Halfway Summer Moon (Anishinaabe) 

WRITING TOPICS:  
  • Knowing Native names for the full moon are based on what is happening during that full moon month in different regions, write a poem about what kind of season it has been for you. How will you title this full moon?
  • Write a poem that will manifest the kind of moon season you are about to have, or the one you want to have.
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3. Antonym Poem

Ah, his poem.         
This short film. 
If you do nothing else this week, watch this film. 

If you're ready to think and write, take a line of text or a whole poem and write the opposite or antonym for each word.  Try this for a few lines, and see if a poem appears.  OR  Let the lines be the impetus for some other kind of poem. Don’t worry about being too perfect or too correct in conjuring the opposite words. Remember it is a writing challenge not a scientific study.  Use the same Dickinson poem in the video to get started.

Film by Anna Samo + Lisa LaBracio
A poem by Brendan Constantine
Poem performed by Brendan Constantine


The Opposites Game
BRENDAN CONSTANTINE
                              for Patricia Maisch

This day my students and I play the Opposites Game
with a line from Emily Dickinson. My life had stood
a loaded gun
, it goes and I write it on the board,
pausing so they can call out the antonyms –

My                 Your
Life                Death
Had stood ?   Will sit

A                   Many
Loaded                     Empty
Gun ?

Gun.
For a moment, very much like the one between
lightning and it’s sound, the children just stare at me,
and then it comes, a flurry, a hail storm of answers –

Flower, says one. No, Book, says another. That's stupid,
cries a third, the opposite of a gun is a pillow. Or maybe
a hug, but not a book, no way is it a book. With this,
the others gather their thoughts

and suddenly it’s a shouting match. No one can agree,
for every student there’s a final answer. It's a song,
a prayer, I mean a promise, like a wedding ring, and
later a baby. Or what’s that person who delivers babies?

A midwife? Yes, a midwife. No, that’s wrong. You're so
wrong you’ll never be right again. It's a whisper, a star,
it's saying I love you into your hand and then touching
someone's ear. Are you crazy? Are you the president

of Stupid-land? You should be, When's the election?
It’s a teddy bear, a sword, a perfect, perfect peach.
Go back to the first one, it's a flower, a white rose.
When the bell rings, I reach for an eraser but a girl

snatches it from my hand. Nothing's decided, she says,
We’re not done here. I leave all the answers
on the board. The next day some of them have
stopped talking to each other, they’ve taken sides.

There's a Flower club. And a Kitten club. And two boys
calling themselves The Snowballs. The rest have stuck
with the original game, which was to try to write
something like poetry.

It's a diamond, it's a dance,
the opposite of a gun is a museum in France.
It's the moon, it's a mirror,
it's the sound of a bell and the hearer.


The arguing starts again, more shouting, and finally
a new club. For the first time I dare to push them.
Maybe all of you are right, I say.

Well, maybe. Maybe it's everything we said. Maybe it’s
everything we didn't say. It's words and the spaces for words.
They're looking at each other now. It's everything in this room
and outside this room and down the street and in the sky.

It's everyone on campus and at the mall, and all the people
waiting at the hospital. And at the post office. And, yeah,
it's a flower, too. All the flowers. The whole garden.
The opposite of a gun is wherever you point it.

Don’t write that on the board, they say. Just say poem.
Your death will sit through many empty poems.


Source: The American Journal of Poetry

Tell us a word for which you had the hardest time
​coming up with the antonym, an opposite.
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Writing Prompts about NUMBERS (part 2)

7/14/2021

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Introduction

At the intersection of numbers and words, I always held the belief I was bad with numbers, even transposing double and triple digit numbers and phone numbers.  (My financial advisor claims i'm doing fine with numbers, so I will choose to believe him!) Where some have dyslexia with letters and others transpose sounds in words, I never did -- always considered language my strong suit.  Yet, when I took the high school placement tests, I was recommended for advanced maths and advanced science but regular level English classes.  "Do you think we got the right results?" my dad with the schedule card in his hand.  And, in grad school, a language and rhetoric professor asked students to raise their hands if their analytical score was higher than their verbal score on the GREs--apparently, it was a thing for language people!  Language is an equation, too.

All this to say, I love thinking about numbers and how we use them all the time in passwords and user names, in explanations and on the GPS.  I am surprised that thinking in terms of numbers makes my brain work in a different way, accessing my stories in a different way.  How about you?

After this week's writing challenges with numbers, try NUMBERS Part 1, here!    

Warm-Up Write

Song titles with numbers in them--choose some prompts and write for 15 min.  Or play the music and write about whatever surfaces; see if it structures your writing into stanzas and refrains.
“Seven Bridges Road” (Eagles): 
  • Write a poem about a specific location, an epic location, a place whose feel you can’t forget
  • Write about a place and include the address--they're descriptive and specific, and therefore, interesting.
“Seven Nation Army”
​(White Stripes): 
  • In the song Jack White sings “seven nation army couldn't hold me back.” What couldn’t hold you back? From what? Write the poem
  • Tell me about 7 of anything, and turn it into a poem.
“Take 5”
(Dave Brubeck)
  • When do you need to take 5? How do you take 5? Write that poem.

Mentor Poem

"Sixty-four now . . ."
AGNES NEMES NAGY
Translated from Hungarian by George Szirtes
 
Sixty-four now. Summer. No use acting
as if this were what I was quite expecting.
Still there's a thaw, a soft appeasement,
a gentle waking up and easement,
this summer of my sixty-fourth commencing.

Writing Prompt 

  • Write a poem about how old you are now; follow the style of Nagy's poem (or let  your own organic structure take place).
  • The Beatles sing, "Will you still need me, will you still feed me, when I'm sixty-four?"  What do you hope someone will still do when you're _____?  Tell me about it in a poem.  Write for 10 minutes.

For Discussion

​Numbers
MARY CORNISH
 
I like the generosity of numbers.
The way, for example,
they are willing to count
anything or anyone:
two pickles, one door to the room,
eight dancers dressed as swans.
 
I like the domesticity of addition--
add two cups of milk and stir--
the sense of plenty: six plums
on the ground, three more
falling from the tree.
 
And multiplication's school
of fish times fish,
whose silver bodies breed
beneath the shadow
of a boat.
 
Even subtraction is never loss,
just addition somewhere else:
five sparrows take away two,
the two in someone else's
garden now.
 
There's an amplitude to long division,
as it opens Chinese take-out
box by paper box,
inside every folded cookie
a new fortune.
 
And I never fail to be surprised
by the gift of an odd remainder,
footloose at the end:
forty-seven divided by eleven equals four,
with three remaining.
 
Three boys beyond their mothers' call,
two Italians off to the sea,
one sock that isn't anywhere you look
​
Mary Cornish, “Numbers” from Red Studio. Copyright © 2007 by Mary Cornish
Source: Poetry Foundation 
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Writing Prompts for Summer Love

7/7/2021

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Vintage Butterfly Collage by Venita Oberholter

Introduction

"Summer Love" is derivatively explored in these mentor poems and writing topics -- traditional love and love lost, for sure -- then, there's the love of summer, or the life changing things that are "metaphored "by summer and its grand contents -- even the summers we can't forget . . . for whatever reason.

First Mentor Poem

The Woman Who Turned Down a Date with a Cherry Farmer
AIMEE NEZHUKUMATATHIL
 
           Fredonia, NY
 
Of course I regret it. I mean there I was under umbrellas of fruit
so red they had to be borne of Summer, and no other season. 
Flip-flops and fishhooks. Ice cubes made of lemonade and sprigs 
of mint to slip in blue glasses of tea. I was dusty, my ponytail
all askew and the tips of my fingers ran, of course, red
 
from the fruitwounds of cherries I plunked into my bucket
and still—he must have seen some small bit of loveliness
in walking his orchard with me. He pointed out which trees
were sweetest, which ones bore double seeds—puffing out
the flesh and oh the surprise on your tongue with two tiny stones
 
(a twin spit), making a small gun of your mouth. Did I mention
my favorite color is red? His jeans were worn and twisty
around the tops of his boot; his hands thick but careful, 
nimble enough to pull fruit from his trees without tearing
the thin skin; the cherry dust and fingerprints on his eyeglasses. 
 
I just know when he stuffed his hands in his pockets, said
Okay. Couldn't hurt to try? and shuffled back to his roadside stand
to arrange his jelly jars and stacks of buckets, I had made
a terrible mistake. I just know my summer would've been
full of pies, tartlets, turnovers—so much jubilee. 

Aimee Nezhukumatathil, "The Woman Who Turned Down a Date with a Cherry Farmer" from  Miracle Fruit.  Copyright © 2003 by Aimee Nezhukumatathil.  Source: PoetryFoundation.org

Writing Prompts

  • Tell me about second thoughts. About what you turned down. About the road not chosen (to cross reference poets!)
  • Tell me about someone you notice from afar, include all the details you notice.  Or tell me about someone you interact with daily, in intimate observatory detail.
  • Write a poem about a summer love.
  • Write a love poem to summer.
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Second Mentor Poem

Summer
ROBIN COSTE LEWIS
 
Last summer, two discrete young snakes left their skin
on my small porch, two mornings in a row. Being
 
postmodern now, I pretended as if I did not see
them, nor understand what I knew to be circling
 
inside me. Instead, every hour I told my son
to stop with his incessant back-chat. I peeled
 
a banana. And cursed God—His arrogance,
His gall—to still expect our devotion
 
after creating love. And mosquitoes. I showed
my son the papery dead skins so he could
 
know, too, what it feels like when something shows up
at your door—twice—telling you what you already know. 
 
 
Robin Coste Lewis, "Summer" from Voyage of the Sable Venus. Copyright © 2015 by Robin Coste Lewis.  (Alfred A. Knopf, 2015) Source: poetryfoundation.org

Writing Prompts

  • What do you already know?
  • What are the shiftings, the changing patterns, the signs around you, telling you things are changing?
  • What does summer leave at your doorstep?
  • Write an ode to summer.
​

For Discussion

Endless Summer
NATE PRITTS
 
. . .
It was the summer I fucked up    the summer    fucked up   me
fucked up   a fuck-up in the summer   & I spent time laying under stars
too much   time I wasted  the stars  you lied to me under the stars
& the summer was endless   the summer endless   it was an endless summer
. . .
. . .
endless   & I said things like   “If I ever see you again”
but   I’ll never see you again   I never saw you again   I made sure of that
& I circled   the lake   I went in circles    the lake was endless   it was
summer   I fucked up   too much time & I never saw   you again   & I
. . .
. . .
circled & it was   endless & the stars    lied to me   the summer
light   moving so slowly   I saw the summer light move   endless
& when I see you   the trees will cluster   green rage green   trees raging
with love   endless love & I’ll never see you   again   I made sure of that
. . .
. . .
wasted under the stars   the slow summer   light   the endless fuck-up
& you never again   you lovely   you summer you   everything that is now
never again   whatever that may be   the rage I loved   me under the stars
then & now   endless   wasting away me   haze wandering around endless
. . .
. . .
haze  it was endless  too much time & you   lied to me & I    said things like
I can’t describe the air on my skin can you   can you please   I know it was
important & the light from stars   moved   so slowly   & you   moved off
forever   how can you save everything   everything   important   endless
. . .
. . .
summer light   the fuck-up   the lake a circle   circling   the lake
how can you save everything   how can I   answer you the light of summer
stars I’m sorry  for my light   the endlessness of my endless & my   fuck-up
the me that is   now   looking back & thinking   & this summer circling
. . .
 
Nate Pritts, "Endless Summer" from The Wonderfull Yeare (a shepherd’s calendar). Copyright © 2009 by Nate Pritts.   Source: poetryfoundation.org

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